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SACE NO. #922148L
Social Media Development + Refinement...
Account 1
bio
bio
Account 2
Comments
Account 1
For this comment I believe looks well organised. I like the emoji separating the sentence and the caps at the beginning.
I then tagged the brand name in the photo for reference so that views can look deeper into the product.
Here I fixed some spelling mistakes as well as adding a few more hashtags. I also spaced out the paragraph.
For my first account's bio simply wrote what first come to head. I I need more capitals in this bio. I also need to work the first sentence better
For this comment I believe it would look better if it were more spaced out by entering down some sentences.
Here I entered down from 'not to mention' and 'link in bio'. this looks much more professional.
I then tried using a small emoji to define spaces between sentences which looks even better.
For this comment I had written that this item was on sale. Because I had tagged the brand name in the photo they asked me to remove the sale price as it is their rules.
Here I removed the sale price and re-phrased the sentence. I really like the caps at the start.
Here I simply added a hashtag which makes the caption look nice and professional.
Comments
Account 2
This caption is nice but a bit to short and simple.
Here I added an extra sentence as well as some emojis which looks much better.
This caption id okay but very basic. Needs some more colour.
Here I added two emojis which really help the caption but could dow with a hashtag.
I then simply added two hashtags next too the emoji's
This comment is also very simple and needs a little more to it.
I then added a short extra phrase onto it and some dots.
Here I added two hashtags below the caption which looks much better.
Account 1
Photo arrangement
For the photo arrangement for my first account I choose some of my favourite photos and went from there. Here I firstly removed the bottom right photo as I believe it clashed with the white next to it.
After removing ht bottom right photo I added another photo. I think the bottom middle photo clashes with the photo next to it because of the contrast settings. I also don't like the left second from the bottom photo there as it doest suit the colours around it.
Here I removed the photos I didn't agree with and added two more that would suit the colour tone of the collage.
Photo arrangement
Account 2
I love this page as it is so much brighter. Although I don't like the two decrease contrast photos together again.
Here I removed the two photos I didn't like together and rearranged the top of the collage to get the colour pattern right.
I then changed the top two photo around to get some more blue in the collage to even it out.
Here I changed the heading to all capitals and re-phrased the top sentence. I added more caps and also an emoji.
I then added the slashes under the title which I like as it separates the coming bio. I also added dot points to the three main points. I removed a hashtag from next to the camera also.
For my second account I used slashes as markers before each main point and one emoji which I don't like.
I then gave a space between the slash and the sentence. I changed the emoji.
Here I added a 'quirky saying' to the bottom which I think works well. I also re-phrased the top sentence.
COMbined Accounts
Single account refinement
Here I combined what I liked about both collages together to get the best out come possible.
For the bio I also combined what I liked most about each bio most and added some extras. Here I changed the red heart to a blue heart.
Finally I changed the dot points too crosses and the quote into caps. I also put the 'www' in front of my url after looking through my investigating again.
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